After My Transformation Part 1

This next set of captions is set up as a video with user comments. The text bubbles represent what is happening through a video while the text below decribes time passing by because you when you watch videos online there is usually new comments below the video. That's what I was trying to do here. I saw this as the only way to pull off what I was thinking. It might not be the most detailed in design, but I think it turned out well. I plan to continue this eventually.

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